#FMPprogress: Part III – Process and Feedback

Part III: She starts running towards the ice cream cart.

The run cycle took me the longest to work on. and still, feel needs a lot more work.

Version 1 of the animation that I submitted to Luke, my tutor is now on Vimeo.

FMP Feedback for the animation was positive albeit some changes have to be made.

  1. Add slight hips and chest animation to the 1st cam scene. – Leah’s surprise at spotting an ice-cream cart in the park.
  2. To give a more realistic feel to Leah, make the eye blinks drag – the left eye blinks 1 frame before the right eye does.
  3. Camera placement – 1st cam slightly to left so that Leah falls on the intersections of the rule of thirds grid
  4. Leah’s perspective of the ice cream cart cam – 1st frame more towards left, make the cart and Paul (Ice cream vendor) to fall on the right intersections of the rule of thirds grid.
  5. Add swing from down to up for Paul’s hand movement.
  6. Paul hips to move right rather than left to support his weight when he leans on the cart.
  7. Drag Leah’s hand movement a little behind to have a better overlap motion.
  8. Add a slight more bounce to Leah’s hips during her jump
  9. When Leah bounces back up, drag her lower jaw movement

I am having trouble with making Leah’s run cycle work for this scene like I want it to. Luke suggested the following reference video of a toddler trying to run.

Suggestion was to make Leah use her heel to land on the ground instead of tip toes when running, like the toddler in the video.

But I see Leah as a 6-7 year old kid and have been animating her with that age in mind and not a baby like in the video. I will keep the search on for more reference videos suiting Leah’s age and work on the run.

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